The shoe vs the sandal. (01/12/01.)
If it was a choice between her and me
With whom would u rather be?
A stranger for whom your love has just alit
Or someone who has seen you thru every bit
She may be glamorous, beautiful and bold
But isn’t old still gold!?
She may make your heart skip
But will she hold you when you trip?
Days and months will fly fast
Is it a lifetime that her love will last?
Choosing between us is of course your call
Although let me warn you… she will surely make you fall!
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15 comments:
Naice!
I dont know how you come up with this stuff. If I ever go to rhyme, I end up laughing at what I came up with!
Very nice! Love is what, which will not wander.
WOW! That seems something I could have written a year ago, it's literally straight out of my heart!
Of course I think now I would rather be the sandal, the shoe is often misused..!
*Apoo: Then share some with me too...we can laugh together! :P
*pallavi: Thanks a toN! Though I also feel that love does wander, but it's important to see who it returns to... hehe. :)
* Menagerie: :)) ...See I told you we do think alike! Though I've written this way back it stills hold true! Once a shoe, always a shoe... ;)
simple n elegant
(am not reading between the lines :) )
Beautifully put..
All i can hear is ,"Joote khaenge ya Chappal" :) just kidding. I like the analogy.
I think this was yer best post so far..the title is a mismatch tho..:) who is the shoe and who is the sandal..
Wow!!!
On a lighter note, I would suggest that you start penning the dialogues of MILs in Ekta Kapoor's soaps.
;-)
hmm right..... the attraction doesnt last longer..... what lasts longer is the friendship and the relationship... that u share with some dear one......... infatuation passes with time.. but one has to take a decision based on the feelings of truthfulness and sincerity.....good poem... nice choice ....
keep it up....:)
hmm
Let me fall , let me fall
the abyss is the essense of adventure . its the risk this soul crave for .
SOmetime its fun to be naughty , but if you can give him the warmth of ur smile i can bet he will not fall
hey wow,
well..looks like someone is making the wring choices...hold on girl...love will come thy way:-)
Hi lovemarks!
I just came across your blog - really like it :) and love this specific poem of yours!
Will definitely be back for a visit soon...
Take care,
Sheetal :)
*Φ : Thanks!And am glad you didn't... ;)
*Perspective: Happy you liked it!
*Noesis: Kisne diye? Zara hum bhi to sune!;)
*White: Aha! That depends on the reader, my friend! And thanks for the compliment!:)
* Mahfuuz: Ekta Kapoor-helpppppp! hehe
*Adi: Thanks ya! (hug!)
*Hazel: Well look who's here...Hello there again! Look out pal, you are falling! ;)
* Ekta: hehehe... old poem and old story now!
* Sheetal: Yessss! Please do come as often as you can- no entry charges will be applied! On a serious note, am glad to know you and that you liked what I wrote! :)
Yes I am Falling ..
Girate Ko sahara nahi donge???
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