The paper lantern now hangs
outside my window
a vain attempt of display…
of stoicism…
Struggling…as it suspends itself
…fighting…against the might of the winds
that have
conspired to tear it down…
surviving….all odds
…torn and in shards
never giving up…
won’t ever, I know…
not until I choose to discard…
outside my window
a vain attempt of display…
of stoicism…
Struggling…as it suspends itself
…fighting…against the might of the winds
that have
conspired to tear it down…
surviving….all odds
…torn and in shards
never giving up…
won’t ever, I know…
not until I choose to discard…
...these remnants of our friendship…
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21 comments:
inspiration ho, to laaltain jaise ho warna na ho... :P
who gave it to you? i nurse similar emotions regarding the chinese windchimes i have
hey, that was a good one.. hope to met u this sunday.
Alaka
* Harjee: :) ... let's hear a pome on the chinese windchimes then!;)
* Alaka: Hey! Glad you could drop by... yep,this sunday it is!
na re...
no time to think :-(
lagi huee hai
beautiful lines..
I came across pic of a lantern in one of the blogs but it was looking more fierce than friendly.. check this and you'll know what am talking about..
here
Thanks so much for dropping by.. :)
* Harjee: Take time off! We deserve it.... :)
* Φ : Hey! Glad to see you again! And pretty please don't thank me for dropping by, the pleasure's always mine!:)
I had hunted for a pic of a lantern... saw some that I liked, but none that really was 'right'.. then thought better of it, let words have their own meaning...
Yes we always don't end up getting exact pictures of what we have on our minds.. ^_^ words should suffice..
your lantern was such, I could get the picture in your narration..:)
whay are you not meetine me this sunday?
I'm sulking now :-(
no more poems for you...
* Φ : (((smile and hug!))))
* Harjee: Hey! First of all did you even ask me to meet you!? Now it's my turn to sulk! :P
UMM this Poem smells of Red Roses
chup!
you made meeting meeting plans without telling anyone...
*&^&*^^&%^&$%^$&(**()*&(*^^&$%^#$%@#$@$%
* Hazel: :) As long as it smells sweet...
* Harjee: The bottomline being, I was asked! :P
Yes, difficult to completely let go...
But then, time takes care of all! :)
* Blue: ....yes.... but like I mentioned to a friend yesterday, one can move on, but not forget...
Thanks for the lovely comment. And taking the trouble to seek my blog. :-) Yay, you made my day.
*M: Heya! You're welcome, of course! Glad it made your day!:)
* Gaurav: Considering I hadn't heard from you, had to stop by your blog. :)... Agree with your point completely!
the lanterns don even know they're a metaphysical remnants of such thoughts. beautiful words...jus dropped by..
peace..!!
\m/
oh it is simple and beautiful
what more shud one say :)
monsoon magic? :)
Let go...snd move on...
simply beautiful words!
Aloha Everyone!:)
* Namrata: Hey there!Thanks a ton for those nice words!:)))
* Manic: Glad you dropped by and also said something nice! Feels good to read the appreciation...:)
*Ajay: Hey,glad to see you again!...hmm....must be the monsoon magic...
*Shikha: One lets go when there is nothing left to hold on to na? Till then... keep believing!:)
*Curious: Merci Beaucoup my friend!:)
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